a very deep and informative rant.
So have you killed your parents yet?
AMAZING ANIMATION SKILLS. Its as if the drawings were cumming to life.
Holy god, this is one the most jizzful Flash animations I have ever seen in Newgrounds. It had dicks, tits, rape, fat attention whores, lesbians, EXTREMELY loud voice acting, shit and piss and an exciting drama induced storyline that truly shows the true face of one of the internets most unfunniest people who ever existed.
The animation was very well done and the script was very unique , tasteful and hilarious. Fucking 10/10.
THE GOGGLES THEY DO NOTHING
The episode that started it all. Oh man, so many cliches that bored out of my mind. I know this is useless now that you already made the third episode, but seriously, I know you keep saying that you do your best, but please improve your series. I mean my eyes melted from watching the failure of this animation...you'll be hearing from my lawlyer for this.
Although I'll do say some positive things about this. Ofcourse this is your first animation, nobody is expecting for you to just SWOOOSH your talent in one night. So for a beginner, I give you a 7 out of 10. For the story, I already stated this before that your story is a pile of unoriginality, is it too much too ask to go back to the storyboard and change some things about Sore's motive? I mean whats the whole point in destroying random famous mythological creatures? Is it because they are just "bad" or is it because he does it for the lulz? Animation wise, they're is a problem of a slight pause between every action a character takes (such as swinging a sword, or unleashing an attack etc) its annoying.
What is Sore's dox? Where does this series take place? What are the main character's motives? How can you smoothly flow battle scenes and make them more exciting? These are but a few questions you have to ask yourself if you want to make your series.
Funny... all I can read, is practicly "Wueh! I am no better than you, but I pretend it's absolutely okay to offend you and whine like a bitchy crybaby! Wueh!". Go change your diapers, please.
I'm going to agree with Nantes here, this whole Sore the Demon Slayer series is a pile of fail...and autism. The series is soo unoriginal that its not even funny.
Everytime I look at these episodes, I gag at the dullness you convey between Sore and the demons. The fights are shitty, the character is a HUGE Gary Stu who has irrelevant backstory such as "I h8 Jesus lol".
What you can though with this is to put moar effort into these series. If you're are going for the whole macabre thing + action thing, you can extend or add more fight scenes into it. Design better demons and if you can, try to get make voices on your characters. They dont have to have voices, but its a usual turn on for people. Another thing you can do is to make the story clear. I mean its ok for you to describe what the fuck is happening in your "Author comments" but try to flesh the plot out in the animation, because whenever I look at these episodes, all I see is you putting some text saying what is happening and the location. Dont just limit yourself with using text, try out different ways to present a scene and you'll eventually improve your animations for the better.
In my opinion though, this episode "tried to hard" on the whole idea of being "kick ass". It couldve been sooo much better if you took the moar time to work on this project. Personally (and this is just me so, dont get worked up over it plox), these episodes are shitty and uninteresting and like I said before is full of failure and bawwtism...I mean autism. Please dont let your autism get in the way with your work because its just going to fail. Thank You and good night.
You got some interesting points there, kid. However, I do put a LOT of effort into it. Not only do I have to animate everything in my free time; but I also have to do all the sfx myself, and design all the characters myself, plus draw them in several angles. And I put a lot of effort into designing everything as well. And I will not use voice actors, because I have no need for it. This is how I do it. And I don't even try to make it "cool". I just make him fight, and tries to pick out what poses and moves seems the most practical.
You are rude and immature, and your constructive criticism does not excuse you to do that. You insult my videos, calling them "autistic" and "gay". There is nothing "autistic" about it. You just want to find a way to offend me. And calling it gay is just immature hardcore.
I have never even told that Sore hates Jesus - he hates Christians, you jackass. I don't even have autism, you asshole. I have asperger's syndrome, which has nothing to do with this. As a matter of fact, that just makes me capable of doing things easier I like to do.
So, here's what you need to think of - don't insult me, grow up, and get real. You're an insult to humans. And your points might be interesting - but some of them are not even correct, and the rest are more or less useless. If you want me to improve, then behave like an adult.
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